Not All Change Is Good

frasha · 12-09-2005, 23:55

A friend of mine told me she desired if she could change herself, because of what she is going through, I said that it is difficult to change fundamentals. So I wrote this poem I hope you all like it

People don’t change,I found it tough
Or else strange

Life is hard, hard as such
We suffer so much
A little we can’t
just get beyond, Some we crush

But to change our core
Or even more
Shouldn’t be an aim
Trees discard all their leaves
But the root stays, stays the same

So don’t you hide,hide your essence
Parade your colors
Make your presence

Leave a trace,a dose of grace
trek through space

be yourself,be who you are
grab a star
and in time you’ll catch,whatever thing you crave
you will get very far

REMIX_2006 · 13-09-2005, 00:08

اختي الغاليه Frasha
اشكرك جزيل الشكر على كلماتك الرائعه

وننتظر منك المزيد من المواضيع الشيقه

مع محبتي : REMIX_2006

sambaman · 13-09-2005, 14:43

wanna ask u some question
from where do bring such beautifull magic words
that affect our lifes
an take us in to amazing world

really
when I read ur lines
I feel am in aside
an milk, honey on the other side
I feel am fly even touch the sky
an ur esence suronding me
taking me in to acastle cant scape
plz keep me inside urs
an dont let me do by myself

**رغــَــد** · 13-09-2005, 15:25

Hi Farasha

It's the first time for me to read a poem of yours! I'm not even sure whether u've written here others, but what I'm confident of is that I want you to write even more and more & follow your terrific talent & easy going flow of words..

اقتباس:

Leave a trace,a dose of grace
trek through space

Thanx.... Ur Sister/ RaghaD

frasha · 13-09-2005, 23:53

Thank you all for every kind word, and I am honored to be one of you and I will continue
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