Alone

Butterfly · 02-09-2006, 08:37

Alone

I am alone,
so very alone

I hurt,
so very bad

I am ignored,
just thrown aside

I am security,
for others to have

I am lonely,
there is no one close,
no one sees the pain

I cry,
hope is gone

I am alone,
and no one knows

TEEMA · 02-09-2006, 09:20

dear...Butterfly

When it HURTS to look back, and you're SCARED to look ahead,you can look beside you and your BEST FRIEND will be there

محمد الامين عبدالرحيم · 02-09-2006, 13:13

يا بنات بطلو نبز اخير ليكم

هعهعهعهع

me approvel with TEEMA

Butterfly · 02-09-2006, 22:22

الاختا تييما شكران جدا
و شكران ليك يا wd-Elamin

الصريح · 05-01-2007, 00:09

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة TEEMA

dear...Butterfly

When it HURTS to look back, and you're SCARED to look ahead,you can look beside you and your BEST FRIEND will be there

am alone like you

tuha250 · 08-01-2007, 00:48

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Butterfly

Alone

I am alone,
so very alone

I hurt,
so very bad

I am ignored,
just thrown aside

I am security,
for others to have

I am lonely,
there is no one close,
no one sees the pain

I cry,
hope is gone

I am alone,
and no one knows

DEAR .. WE ARE ALL LIKE YOU
EVERY ONE LOOKING FOR REAL FRIND
BUT ACTUALLY IT IS VERY HARD TO FIND SOME ONE TO STAY BESIDE YOU FOR NO THING .. JUST FOR FRIENDSHIP AND HUMANITY .. HOPE THAT YOU FEEL WELL WITH THIS NEW YEAR .. AND ALL MY BEST WISHES FOR YOU

ALFATIH

Butterfly · 11-01-2007, 15:53

شكرا ليكم علي الكلمات الحلوه دي
الشكر الي الصريح, tuha250

tuha250 · 13-01-2007, 02:16

الأخت
Butterfly
يمكن لأني الناس بتحس بالوحدة زيك
ليك التحية
الفاتح

الشاعر · 19-01-2007, 14:06

الوحده قاتله حقا

وبقيت وحدي والقمر
علمته صمتي وعلمني السهر
واراق لي من نوره نورا توارى في دموعي وانكسر
والليل ضل الى الصباح طريقه
والنجم خل الليل يأبى أن يدل الى الصباح صديقه
فنزلت بحر الليل هيابا لمست براحتي عميقه
وسألت نفسي هل سأعبر ام اظل على الزمان غريقه
مع تحيات الشاعر

HimOvicH · 18-05-2007, 02:42

hey,

very nice participation like the other ones i readed before!!

please keep doing that and we'r all besida you!!

by the way... some of your expressions are a little bit weak!!! (just a little bit)

so may be you need some advice!!

but keep on!!!